IN SCHOOL, THE GIRLS were beginning to get interested in boys
and say things that weren’t very friendly anymore. One day a big
freckle-faced girl stopped her as she walked the halls after school
and pushed her against the wall. “Let me see your nose a minute,”
she said, pushing her thumb up against it without asking. “You have
a very flat nose, don’t you?” she said, examining her like a
doctor. “You see how I have a bump on my nose? You don’t have that,
do you?”
Susan did not know how to respond but tried to pull away. “Your
name isn’t really Susan, is it?” the girl persisted. “It’s really”
— and she pulled her own face outward to give it a slant-eyed look
— “Ching Chow Chong, isn’t it?”
Susan broke away and ran down the hall. “Ching Chow Chong,” the
girl called after her. After that, she did not allow herself to be
caught in the halls alone again.
As teenage years took their toll, Susan found herself
desperately wanting to be like everyone else. Mandarin was
forgotten. She began dressing more scantily and neglecting her
studies, eager to spend time at the beach and be with the crowd.
Whenever she disrobed, however, she was reminded of how much darker
than the other girls she was. They would were more bronzed but hers
was a tough, dark tan that never seemed to fade. She wondered if
any boy would ever like her.
Then at the beginning of junior year a tall, wispy boy with
blondish hair moved into town. He was shy and the other kids didn’t
take much interest in him but Susan noticed him and it seemed he
noticed her. One day they found themselves standing in the lunch
line together.
“You’re new, aren’t you?” Susan asked.
“How did you know?” he answered, apparently amazed that anyone
had noticed him.
“Oh, I keep track of things,” she said cheerfully. “My name’s
Susan, what’s yours?”
The young man was strangely silent for a moment. “Steven,” he
finally said.
“Did your family just move into town?” she asked
innocuously.
“I don’t have a family,” said Steven.
After many lunches spent together, Susan finally heard the whole
story. Steven was a “lost child,” a 17-year-old who had been
abandoned by his family, members of a polygamous Mormon cult on the
Arizona border. The group leader, a charismatic preacher who
already had seven wives, had condemned Steven when he objected to
the preacher taking his older sister as his eighth wife. Calling
Steven the “spawn of the Devil,” the preacher had demanded Steven
be expelled from the group. His family, devout followers, had
dutifully complied. One an overcast afternoon in November, they had
packed Steven a suitcase, driven him to a deserted spot in the
countryside 50 miles from their home, put him out of the car and
told him they would never see him again. A stranger had picked him
up on the road and driven him to Denver. After living on the
streets for six months Steven had finally been taken in by a
halfway house in Boulder. They were trying to place him in a foster
home. Meanwhile he was attending Boulder High School.
For once Susan felt like the insider. She guided him through
American culture as if he were a visitor who had just arrived from
outer space. He knew nothing of history, religion, or popular
music. He didn’t know that there were comic books or that Catholics
believed in Jesus Christ or that there was a President of the
United States. When a foster home finally took him in, it was
another Mormon family and they were not enthusiastic about Steven
and Susan dating.
“Isn’t this all a little difficult?” her mother asked. “Wouldn’t
it be better if you dated someone who was more like us?”
“But mom, he’s so sweet,” she said. “And I think he needs
me.”
Peppermint Tea | 10.26.12 @ 9:55AM
So Tucker, the Mormons polygamists are the heavies in your story? Yeah, Sir Arthur Henry Doyle thinks you really broke the mold on that one. Just in time for the election.
Maybe you ought to actually meet a real Mormon; I know, write Mitt and ask him to be court novelist.
fmm| 10.26.12 @ 12:23PM
Tucker's choice here is odd to say the least.
Bob K| 10.26.12 @ 12:13PM
Now you aren't making sense Mr. Tucker.
How did all this happen in 50 years? That bears explanation.
Why should Susan not learn Cantonese rather than Mandarin? There are 8 major dialects in China and they are mutually unintelligible to others.
Since China now has a large muslim populace as indicated in earlier installments why shouldn't Susan have learned the Turkic language that was spoken in China's muslim western provinces?
And since they are muslims it seems unlikely that they would change their language to please China's mandarin upper class, doesn't it?
As far as the USA tolerating Mormon polygamous religious groups we have to conclude that your vision of America 50 years from now is that of an ungovernable Republic run by the laws of "diversity;" devoid of democracy and divided into small uncooperative enclaves.
I will keep reading these installments to see how you get out of this hole.
fmm| 10.26.12 @ 12:22PM
The USA could only be as depicted here if your penultimate paragraph is true.
fmm| 10.26.12 @ 12:24PM
Apologies above reply was to Bob K.
Dai Alanye | 10.26.12 @ 12:35PM
2065 is fine work -- genuine characters and highly-imaginative speculative history. The tale pulls the reader in by using only a slight exaggeration of present trends, and I'm happy to suspend the necessary modicum of disbelief that all good fiction requires.
PolishKnight| 10.26.12 @ 2:53PM
My Chinese friends tell me that the woman shortage isn't that serious. Many men in the lower classes are winding up without wives but it's not serious since many consider raising a family to be a burden rather than a blessing. Also keep in mind that the male to female ratio isn't that high. Perhaps 55:45 or something like that.
On the other hand, the author's notion of young men 50 years from now playing video games and winding up slackers is amusing since that's been going on for some time now. Check out the film "Clerks". Heck, 10 years from now video games will be obsolete (I remember when video arcades were the rage 25 years ago.) What we're already facing is a shortage in the states of breadwinning men combined with a dying manufacturing sector as universities turn out female bureaucrats and healthcare workers.